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Thoughts twisting
Inside my head
Tears streaming
Down my face

My eyes are not open
But I’m still awake
My heart is broken
Pain is not for fake

I’m trying to release
My heart’s bitterness
But it only increases
My deep sickness

My heart is hollow
My throat is dry
I am just a shadow
No one hears me cry
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errr
maybe... maybe not
2nd May 09

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powerful.

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Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]
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is it? :P
lol thank you
i'm glad you liked it :)

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that I did :)

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Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]
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Great work, good message to it

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A deathly grave, oh why don't we learn?
Feel our sadness and our hearts yearn
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thank you :D
a little bit depressive, no ? xD

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Indeed, but it had a good tone to it which I liked

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A deathly grave, oh why don't we learn?
Feel our sadness and our hearts yearn
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how come there are more people writing depressive literature than happy ? xD

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Because depressing literature allows one to express his/her pain and sorrow against the cruel and bitter world

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A deathly grave, oh why don't we learn?
Feel our sadness and our hearts yearn

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